When I speak on the surface,
you absorb its meaning profound.
you carefully delve and think
when I mock around…
And when indeed I go deep,
you couldn’t care less and sleep
having expressed what my heart beseeched,
I have often mistakenly felt pleased
in thinking that you desirably approved,
my outpourings, which though were crude.
You smirk and gaze with your eyes in daze,
Then finally I discern that you have no concern.
With what I might go through and to say it true,
your ears got choked and your heart has doped.
For how many ages must I wait?
to trap you soundly with my bait!
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amazing amazing stuff sheerie... its so deep... pls write more often. I will be looking forward to read more stuff frm u
ReplyDeleteoh tnx so much ana! ws my first blog ever....:)
ReplyDeleteamazingly brilliant and romantic....i loved it!
ReplyDeleteu found it romantic?? its barely romantic ;)
ReplyDeleteyaar tum dono shaadi kar hi lo :)
ReplyDeleteSomehow i do understand every single line of this poem...probably because my past revolves around such people like in this piece. And yes its not romantic but its definitely about a close friend.
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